IF YOU’RE A regular (or a blogular…) you know the drill. If not, you’ll soon see by diverting eyes downwards and reading left to right in a typical English fashion:
One punch. Hospitalised. Boxing still. Still.
Left for dead. Revenge…brr, so cold.
Cutting, stacking, burning; The human sawmill.
Carbon dated. It shouldn’t exist – yet.
The rusty gate squeaked: evil entered.
Bobblehead motionless, by time firefighters arrived.
Great collection! I especially like the first one, with the word ‘still’ used twice, with different meanings.
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Pffft another great collection that combines humor and quirkiness. That last line about the bobblehead intrigues me so.
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Lol at pffft ☺
Thanks jade, I think that line you picked was my favourite once I’d written it (of this weeks batch).
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Swatted spider. Missed. It hides. Waiting.
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Good one.
They always seem so elusive until the light go out.
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Another great collection, but I think my favorite this time is, “One punch. Hospitalised. Boxing still. Still.”
It says so much about who that person is in so few words.
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Thanks Jenn ☺
Thats always the aim, to produce a jack in the box effect, where the whole story becomes apparent, but some days the idea or words just dont form.
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Carbon dated silicon. Alien chain reaction.
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Good one, could lead to many situations.
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Ha ha. This was the best line
…and reading left to right in a typical English fashion
but ok, the other were brilliant aslo.
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Haha unexpected 😅☺ cheers for dropping by.
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So is this a writing challenege? Like write a post with only 6 words?
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It isnt but feel free ☺
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Oh ok.
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Well, I expected carbon to date. It’s boring being single.
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I so very nearly made it into a joke like that lol
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lol Great minds…
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