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Weekly Six XXI – SIX WORD STORIES

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ONE, TWO, THREE, four, five, six. The weekly six is here once more, this time serving up a slightly more poetic vibe with the expected horror element still lurking. Have a gander:

 

They stood, yet simultaneously were falling.

Virtual hugs, from them. No electric.

They bled sand; Time and life.

Light under door, broken by shadow.

Skulls decorated the beach like pebbles…

13 hour operation. Personality still intact.

 

 

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23 thoughts on “Weekly Six XXI – SIX WORD STORIES”

  1. magarisa July 18, 2016 — 4:56 PM

    I love the horror element in these stories!

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      LionAroundWriting July 18, 2016 — 6:19 PM

      Thanks, me too, I find them to be what I gravitate towards especially in six word format which is ideal for the genre.

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      1. magarisa July 18, 2016 — 6:32 PM

        Yes, the six word format is ideal for creating suspense and stimulating the imagination.

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        LionAroundWriting July 18, 2016 — 6:38 PM

        Some days they come easily other times its like chewing rocks.

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      3. magarisa July 18, 2016 — 7:58 PM

        The amount of time and effort required to write is not necessarily proportional to the number of words in a piece. 🙂

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  2. thelonelyauthorblog July 13, 2016 — 10:29 PM

    My favorite was the light under the door. Well done.

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  3. The Food Trooper July 13, 2016 — 7:42 PM

    Haha the last one is funny!

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  4. Dont You Forget About Me July 13, 2016 — 6:37 PM

    ‘They bled sand’ had me picturing an hourglass counting down my life. Very nice!

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  5. jademwong July 13, 2016 — 5:06 PM

    That last one sounds very sci-fi to me. Awesome collection this week!

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  6. draliman July 13, 2016 — 4:41 PM

    Love the last one, brings to mind a whole backstory.

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  7. kernerangelina July 13, 2016 — 4:34 PM

    “They bled sand; Time and life.” -This is really good.

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  8. VictoryInTrouble July 13, 2016 — 4:19 PM

    The light under the door one makes me think of Signs- that M. Night Shyamalan movie. Creepy!

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      LionAroundWriting July 13, 2016 — 4:24 PM

      I havent seen all of it, I generally go with Sixth Sense was his only movie worth watching.
      Thanks for reading VIP ☺

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      1. VictoryInTrouble July 13, 2016 — 4:26 PM

        Ha ha, the one I haven’t seen.

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        LionAroundWriting July 13, 2016 — 4:28 PM

        Lol. Its so much better than every other film since that shamalamamama made it makes me wonder if he actually wrote the script or even directed.

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      3. VictoryInTrouble July 13, 2016 — 4:30 PM

        Lol! Guess you don’t like him! 😆

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  9. Anita Lubesh July 13, 2016 — 4:00 PM

    Very nice. I wish I hadn’t read about the light under the door.

    Can I interest you in this?https://writingasitcomes.wordpress.com/2016/07/13/give-me-a-peace/comment-page-1/#comment-586

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